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Re: Love of a King.
It's seen very interesting. Usually, the king didn't care if he was hurting his wife by taking another, but I like your king, he seems very kind hearted. I hope ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Three
ash, did you know that my last name is Hunt too? Anyway.... I cried there at the end, because i felt so sorry for Carmen. He truly loves sophia with ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Two
Nice work, ash. Unlike Angel of Death, I like the bitter Nora, though i wish she was a little nicer to Sophia. I love this new turn. So what i ...
Dec 24, 2008 -
Re: Because - Chap. 1 (Edited)
It's very interesting, I have to tell you that. I take it that this is about a stalker with an obsession with this girl and she thinks that he is ...
Dec 18, 2008 -
Re: -Inconcessus- One
ash, I love it. Carmen and Sophia are much more...how can i say it....re-latable, i suppose. at least to me, since i have dealt with many moves myself. i love ...
Dec 18, 2008 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Preface
ohhhh, i like this a lot better now. So, in this preface Sophia was going to turn Issac but she was interupt by Rouke. but of course she had the ...
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: Broken Vow / Preface
Wow! hi ash. i thought i would go ahead and start reading it before you ask me too. Not that i mind of course. Again wow! I could practically feel ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Historical Fiction
The great and terrible Beauty Rebel Angels The Sweet Far Thing All those of are by Libba bray. It's a trilogy about a girl and how she coping with her ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: The Dark Side of the Moon - Prologue
wow. really details. now, this is the new poisoned roses, but i felt like it is darker and deeper than ever before. I felt a twist coming on, like one ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: Untouched-Epilogue
i think you need to go into a little bit more detail with this one. who did she choose? is she now a vampire too? are her and jasper going ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: In the Eyes of the Deceiver [Preface]
wow. a very powerful preface. i could feel the turmoil that the character is giving off. so, this is what i am giving off of this so far. A widow, ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Untouched ch 19
whoa, wait a minute. i have read this chapter before. are you sure that you aren't copy stuff? maybe i should just go back to the beginning and re-read thing. ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Blue; Five
a pack of shifter living together? interesting... you know....i have an idea similar to this story, but i am going to make it a companion to Poison Love by mentioning ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Blue; Four
I have a feeling that will is being cruel to her to push her away from him. that's the vibe i am getting from this chapter. I really like it ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Blue; Three
Sweet! a shifter story. i kind of figure thats what this was, since you are writing(or typing) a vampire one. Willian seems like a relatable character. i like the story ...
Oct 22, 2008
